A story with everybody in it
A Day in Candyfloss Land
Fifty-five fluffs, one day, and a path that had to be lit by dark
In Candyfloss Land, every fluff is spun at the Great Candyfloss Wheel, out of a cloud.
That is where they all come from β the happy ones and the cross ones, the ones who bounce and the ones who worry, every single one. A cloud comes down, the Wheel turns, and out comes somebody new with a feeling of their own to look after.
But a Wheel with no cloud has nothing to spin. And all that season, the Wheel had stood still.
So Rainbow, who is the chief of Candyfloss Land, had gone over the far side of the world to ask the sky for another one. He had been gone since the spring.
This is the story of the day he came home. It is a day with fifty-five fluffs in it, all of them busy, most of them nowhere near each other, and not one of them able to see the whole thing.
You can. That is rather the point of reading it.

55 threads Β· six parts Β· about 120 minutes read aloud
New way to read
Everyone, all day β
Move one clock and see where all fifty-five fluffs are standing, together, at any minute of the day.
The day, hour by hour
Checkpoint 1 Β· first light Β· before the sun
Before the Sun
Not much happens before the sun comes up, unless you are the sort of fluff who is awake then.
Read this part as a story β05:10Winky's gatepost
Winky wakes before the sun and finds a strand of floss tied to the gatepost with a note on it: "Home tonight. Bringing a cloud. β Rainbow." Winky reads it four times.
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Winky05:20Winky's step

Winky bounces out of the gate and clips the lantern box with one foot. It goes over with a clatter like a drawer of spoons; lanterns roll into the long grass, down the bank and under the bridge. Winky does not notice and is three gardens away. Zenny, sitting still in the dark, hears it and remembers the direction.
05:50the long grass by the gate
Mossy finds the first lantern on its side in the wet grass, with a sleeping snail inside. The snail is rehoused on a damp stone first. Mossy carries the lantern back to the step and says nothing about it, and notices a flattened trail in the grass running down towards the bank β much too long to have been made by one lantern.
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Mossy06:00Winky's front room
Snoozy takes one lantern β the last one on the route, the one for over Winky's door β indoors, cleans it, and sets it on the table by the door. It sits there all day where nobody in the yard can see it. This is the lantern everybody will later believe is missing.
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Snoozy06:10the wall outside Shivvy's

Shivvy, awake all night as usual, names the four places on the path where the dark is worst: the hedge tunnel, the turn by the bridge, the long stretch past the orchard, and the three steps by the gate. Peeky counts them on both paws β four places nobody has thought of.
06:30the lane

Zippy runs the whole path before breakfast and comes back with two facts nobody had: it is far longer than anyone remembers, and there are iron hooks the entire way, far more than expected. Fizzy, already fighting a lantern hinge in the road, makes Zippy say it again slowly and goes to find somebody with a pencil.
Checkpoint 2 Β· morning Β· early
The Long Morning
By breakfast the whole land knew, and the whole land had a job.
Read this part as a story β07:30Homey's houseside story
Homey does not go out. The whole land is out on the path and Homey stays in and does the things that make a house a house on a day when everything else has changed shape: the blanket folded into the bag, the comfort kit packed, the good cups found, bread made. Nobody comes and nobody is expected. It is not hiding and it is not sulking; it is the only way Homey knows to put ground under a day like this one.
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Homey07:45the yard
The bank job is handed to a fluff who is frightened of the bank and says yes because everybody is looking. Under all the morning noise, Hushy hears them say "oh" β one syllable, which nobody else catches.
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Hushy08:00the edge of the yard
Lonny begins standing at the edge of the yard being available, and goes on doing it for most of the morning without asking for anything.
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Lonny08:00the barn
Puzzly begins wondering what time the sun actually goes down, assumes everybody else knows, and says nothing about it for nearly six hours.
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Puzzly09:00the yard
Beamy starts a list on the back of an envelope of everything anybody does well, and keeps it going all day.
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Beamy09:30the yard

Lonny finally says no to being helped and asks for the orchard hooks instead β for Pinky, not with Pinky. Pinky nearly refuses out of habit; Handy, going past with rope, says "Pinky. Let them." Pinky accepts, and then sits down on an upturned bucket and does nothing for a count of ten.
09:45the yard

Huffy says three times that the carrying rope is frayed and is told not to spoil the day. Huffy does dragon breath, then holds the worn part out in silence until everybody looks. Nobody apologises. Huffy cuts the rope into short lengths, three lanterns to a length, so that if one goes only three go.
10:00the gatepost

Tidy draws the day as nine pictures in order and pins the board to the gatepost, with the hanging done from the far end back towards Winky's house. Muddle arrives overwhelmed and is told to name the smallest job: wicks. Wobbly asks what if the wicks run out, and Tidy says then we are on the second picture instead of the third.
10:00the barn floor
Glowy sits down with a game and does not get up for most of the morning.
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Glowy10:30the top of the bank

Bravo takes the bank job off the frightened fluff, stands at the top and says out loud "I'm scared of this bit" before going down sideways on the solid part. Four lanterns come up out of the nettles hand to hand. Shivvy, following, gets three steps down without noticing.
10:45the bottom of the bank

Muddle, holding on to the single word "wicks", takes the wrong turning, ends up lost in the nettles and finds the lost box on its side with twenty-two lanterns spilled into the ditch. Getting them up takes three trips and both knees. Puzzly meets Muddle at the top with a bucket.
11:00the hole in the bank

Wondy sees a hole in the bank, wants to climb in, and stops to look and listen instead β something inside is dripping. Puzzly asks dripping what. It is the oil can, gone over the edge that morning and wedged under a root, with about a third left. They get it out with a stick and Newby's scarf.
11:00the ladder
Blushy takes the bottom of the ladder and holds it steady for everybody who goes up, and goes on doing it for about six hours.
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Blushy11:30the Libraryside story

Four of them walk up to the Library to look for the last time the path was lit, because Memo says it happened and nobody believes it happened. They find it: a thin book of the land's old doings, with a line about the night the first chief came home. Dreamy reads the whole afternoon's worth of other things instead. Puzzly asks the librarian three questions nobody else would have asked out loud. They are back by quarter past one.
Checkpoint 3 Β· midday Β· the hot part
The Middle of the Day
It got hot, and everybody had been working for hours, and nobody had had enough to eat.
Read this part as a story β12:30the lane

The row. Jelly, stuck up the orchard where nobody can see, says it is not fair; Huffy answers; it goes up like dry grass. Dinky falls over a bucket on purpose and it stops β then Dinky makes Jelly say the real thing to Huffy, out loud: "I feel left out." Huffy says that is not the same as the rope at all. They do the orchard together after lunch. Tipsy watches the whole thing from the wall.
12:30the Bun Shopside story

Having finished the orchard, Lonny and Peeky go for buns and Buddy comes because Buddy always comes. Newby is talked into trying the green one, one bite, and does not like it, and is pleased to have found that out. They sit outside for an hour and nobody mentions lanterns once.
13:00the bridge
Truly, walking past, notices that three of the bridge hooks done that morning were hooked through the wire instead of the loop. Through the wire holds for about four hours and then opens like a paperclip. Truly says nothing for five hours.
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Truly13:00the yard

Sharey divides the third of a can of oil between fifty-five lanterns β not equally, but deep in the dark places and thin where the moon does half the work. It takes an hour, with Mello passing dishes. A spoonful is left over and goes to Jelly, for the orchard, which does not need it.
13:00the shade by the barn

Mendy patches the nine lanterns that came up out of the ditch split at the seams, through the hottest hour, with Oopsy handing things over and gradually becoming less terrible. Nine bright crooked patches, one off a tea towel. Mopsy comes and sits for a while and says nothing.
13:20the yard
Nopsy is offered the bridge stretch, says "no thank you" and explains why β not steady leaning out over water β and asks for the gate steps and the wall instead. The bridge is done by somebody who likes heights, in half the time.
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Nopsy13:50the barn

Puzzly asks, at last, what time the sun actually goes down. Nobody answers. Muddle guesses seven, Wondy guesses half six, somebody at the back says eight with great confidence. Mossy says twenty past six β it has been getting earlier all month. It is ten to two. The whole land moves twice as fast for the rest of the afternoon.
14:00Market Rowside story

The wick run. Four of them go down Market Row for more wicks, string and matches. Handy says yes to four extra errands on the way and Nopsy says no to two of them, kindly, out loud, which is the first time Handy has watched somebody do that. Snuggs buys eleven blankets on the grounds that it will be cold on the path tonight, and is teased about it, and is right. Gladly counts what the shops had rather than what they did not. Back by twenty past three.
14:00the Candyfloss Gardenside story

Three of them go and sit in the blossom where it is quiet, because the yard has been loud since sunrise. Homey, who has been tight-chested since the morning, says out loud that everything being different is the difficult part. Hushy listens, and then says one thing back. Mopsy says almost nothing and stays the whole time. They walk back at a quarter to four and miss the lanterns being moved.
14:30the crate in the sun3h 50m to sundown

Yetty unpicks the season's knot in the spare rope, starting at one end and working for over an hour, and gets the last loop out at half past two: forty feet of good rope in one piece. Fizzy had said twice to cut it. Nobody makes a fuss, because by then everybody has forgotten it was a knot.
14:30the bank3h 50m to sundown

Boingy goes for the last lantern in the nettles, arrives at the bottom of the bank in a sitting position, and lies there a good while feeling flat while the day carries on above. Pouty sits at the top keeping company from a safe height. Then Boingy says "I can try again", bounces three times, and comes back up the solid way.
Checkpoint 4 Β· afternoon Β· afternoon
The Slow Afternoon
Then somebody counted the lanterns, and there were fifty-four.
Read this part as a story β15:00the barn door3h 20m to sundown

Glowy stands up from the game, looks at something far away β Doodle's map β and sees that the tally is wrong: Humdy has been colouring filled hooks, but four fluffs filled hooks at the far end before the map existed. The path is eight ahead of the map. Nobody had known.
15:00the lane3h 20m to sundown

One lantern in the box is wrong β six-sided, punched tin, older, with star-shaped holes. Told it will look odd in the row, Spotty and Blushy hang it on its own at the turn by the bridge, where the light is genuinely needed. It is the one thing on the path everybody recognises in the dark.
15:00the ladder queue3h 20m to sundown

For an hour and forty minutes Mello stands in the worst place in Candyfloss Land β the queue for the one ladder β holding things for whoever is next and saying "slow and steady" to Fizzy twice. Nothing goes wrong. There is no row all day.
15:30the yard2h 50m to sundown
Memo says the path has been lit once before, right at the beginning, when Rainbow first came β and that it failed because they hung them at the top of the posts and all the light went into the hedge. Every lantern on the path is moved down two feet, which takes an hour nobody has.
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Memo15:45the laneside story2h 35m to sundown

The garden three come back to find every lantern on the path two feet lower than they left it and nobody with time to explain why. They are told about it in about nine words and have to piece the rest together from what the yard is doing.
16:00the yard2h 20m to sundown

The whole land goes wrong at once: snapping over the ladder, something unfair said about the orchard, a lantern dropped. Tipsy, whose voice does not carry, gets down off the wall, walks into the middle and stands there being still until everybody stops, then says "breathe in the fluff, breathe out the huff." Fifty-five fluffs take three balloon-belly breaths together. The last stretch is done properly after this.
16:05the yard2h 15m to sundown
Gladly climbs on Winky's bucket and asks to say the other number. Not one short - fifty-four. At seven o'clock there were none, there was a box in a ditch and nobody had any oil. Nine came out of the nettles, nineteen hinges were mended, forty feet of rope came out of a knot, the orchard is done. The yard gets up off the floor.
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Gladly16:20the barn doorway2h 00m to sundown

Cloudy, drifting, arrives at the answer to the hedge tunnel, where there are no posts at all for thirty feet: you do not hang them, you stand them on the ground down each side, in the roots where the hedge is thick. It becomes the prettiest stretch of the path.
16:40the yard1h 40m to sundown

Peeky says "there's one missing" and it goes into the noise and out the other side as nothing. Peeky walks into the middle of the yard and says it again, louder, one word more: "There's one missing. I counted too. Fifty-four." Buddy stops. The yard stops.
16:50the wall and Winky's front room1h 30m to sundown

Oopsy is certain the missing lantern is his fault and starts apologising. Mendy stops him and makes him find out first. Eleven minutes later: nine came up from the ditch and nine are on the wall. The fifty-fifth is the one Snoozy took indoors at six that morning, sitting cleaned on Winky's table. There never was a missing one.
17:00the yard1h 20m to sundown

Beamy stops in the middle of the yard and asks loudly whether anybody has actually thanked Blushy, who has been on the ladder six hours. Blushy goes scarlet, wants to go home, and stays holding the ladder for the whole of the next eleven seconds and four more fluffs after that.
17:00the far end of the orchard1h 20m to sundown
Jitters, practising the welcome song where nobody can hear, turns round and is the only fluff to see the whole path at once β and sees the thirty black feet of the hedge tunnel with nothing in it. Jitters runs the whole way back unable to speak and points.
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Jitters17:00the tall posts on the long bend1h 20m to sundown

Newby, who has never been above the third rung, does the four tall posts one rung at a time with a report from each, taking eleven minutes, with Shivvy holding the bottom. Comes down shaking and says "I still don't do ladders."
Checkpoint 5 Β· dusk Β· sundown
When the Sun Goes Down
A candyfloss cloud cannot travel in sunlight. It melts.
Read this part as a story β17:30the whole path0h 50m to sundown

Tidy sends Wobbly to check every lantern, far end back, because Wobbly is the only one who would do it properly. Wobbly finds four things: one leaning on a dry twig, one near enough to scorch the hedge, two on soft ground that would tip. All four fixed before dark, with Shivvy along for the dark bits.
18:00the lane0h 20m to sundown

Snuggs hands out the last eleven blankets along the path, comes back with nothing left to give and feels hollow. Lovey points out that Snuggs has hugged about thirty fluffs today and nobody has hugged Snuggs. It takes Snuggs three goes to ask. Lovey gives two; Mopsy comes over and makes it three.
18:00the wall0h 20m to sundown

At dusk everybody totals themselves up and decides they did nothing. Lovey says out loud, at ordinary volume, one true good thing about Lovey β and will not explain why anybody could not. By the time the path is lit there are four fluffs on that wall taking turns.
18:00the bridge wall0h 20m to sundown

Homey, tight-chested since four, sits on the wall by the bridge deciding to go home. Mopsy sits down and says nothing for a long while. Because they are the only two fluffs being silent, Mopsy hears the bridge lantern's glass ticking as the crack opens in the heat β it would have gone over the water within ten minutes. They swap it for Mendy's spare, the one with the flower off a tea towel.
18:10Winky's door0h 10m to sundown
Homey asks whether there is a job at the door, and lights the last lantern of the whole route β the one Snoozy kept back that morning β standing on a chair, with the blanket already folded on the window seat for later.
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Homey18:15the gate0h 05m to sundown

The matches run out with the gate lantern unlit. Pouty has a proper minute of being fed up about it, then points out you do not need a match when there are forty-nine flames already lit up the lane. Hopsy carries a lit twig two hundred feet, slowly, cupped in both paws β it nearly goes out twice near the hedge β and the gate lantern catches from it.
18:15the gatepost0h 05m to sundown

The path lights from the far end back, stretch by stretch, coming down the lane towards the gate. Sparkly stands on the gatepost with Beamy's envelope and names whose bit each stretch is as it comes on β the orchard is Jelly's, the bridge is Truly's, the tunnel is Cloudy's, the rope is Yetty's. The lane cheers each one. Jelly cheers loudest of anybody at the orchard.
18:20the gatesundown
Sundown. Dreamy says what the path looks like from up there: one long strand of floss pulled off the Wheel, and Rainbow coming down the other end of it with a whole cloud. "We've spun him a thread to walk home on." Dreamy draws it badly and quickly on the back of Beamy's envelope. That drawing is still in Winky's kitchen.
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Dreamy18:20the top of the long bendsundown
Rainbow comes down off the hill with the cloud in both arms, stops at the top of the bend, and sees the whole lane lit β every hook, the patched ones, the tin one at the worst corner, the tunnel glowing out of the roots, no gaps anywhere. He stands there a long time, then walks down slowly and reads the day off the path as he goes.
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Rainbow18:35Winky's gate

Everybody is at the gate under the last lantern. Rainbow opens his mouth to ask who needs what β automatic, nine seasons of it β and Tipsy tells him to put the cloud down, Winky has a table for it. Then his arms start shaking and he cannot speak. Mopsy sits down on the wall next to him. Asked which colour it is today, Rainbow says grey, worn out, carried alone since the spring and never said. He sits on the wall a full five minutes before going in, and nobody hurries him.
Checkpoint 6 Β· night Β· night
The Party at Winky's
Read this part as a story β19:00Winky's front room

Fifty-five fluffs will not fit in Winky's front room. They get in anyway. Snoozy's work from the morning comes good: blankets down, cushions along the window seat, lamps turned low. By nine o'clock there is not a fluff in the room who has not sat in it.
21:20on Winky's bucket

Beamy climbs on the bucket with the envelope and reads all of it β eleven minutes, fifty-four names and then Beamy at the bottom in small letters. It is the first time anybody in the room learns that the day was one single piece of work passed from paw to paw.
21:35Winky's front room

Rainbow stands up with a blanket round both shoulders and a cup going cold, and counts it off: the worried one checked twice, the cross one said the thing nobody wanted to hear, the muddled one got lost in exactly the right direction, the sad ones were the only two quiet enough to hear a crack in the glass, the shy one said it twice, the one who cannot sit still ran the far end before lunch, the one who cannot hurry held the queue together. "Not one of those is a comfortable feeling to have. Every one of them did a job today that nothing else could have done."
23:40the lit lane
They walk back down in twos and threes β past the orchard, past the tin lantern throwing stars on the hedge, over the bridge, through the thirty glowing feet of the tunnel. Behind them the Wheel goes round and round with a new cloud on it, and nobody knows yet what comes out of a cloud until it does.
00:00Winky's front room
Snoozy, who took a very small nap on purpose that morning, is still awake at midnight.
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Snoozy
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Follow the lantern
Just the 24 moments that carry one dropped box to a lit path. About fifteen minutes, and the fastest way to see what the day actually was.
One minute, six fluffs
Twenty to five in the yard, told by the one who counted, the one who did not believe her, the one who said it twice and the one who was sure it was his fault. 57 moments work like this.
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